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History Burning
the trick is
to make all believe they inheret a
world all their own
remember to erase the words of the
deceased until
death never existed
and put corpses unburied
into neat containers
under every floor
to lock them up tight is
critical;
panic is the plague in this age
and is it any wonder they forget
with puppet parents
who burn books at christmas?
Literature
forever and ever and ever
as in love with love and
life as i am,
i am struggling to accept that
good things can't last forever
and a touch
is simply
a touch, fleeting yet
so very beautiful & i'm so stuck
in my own (not so beautiful) brain
dreaming up things that i know
i don't even believe in,
but i want them
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turning five into four.
i. gregory,
with his sun-kissed skin & microscopic eyes,
knows not to don rachel's rose-coloured glasses
or take her reality classes.
although he is swimming in disbelief,
he can't help feeling like he's mourning
something that he's not yet lost.
ii. rachel's forte was never gardening.
her family tree could rain its leaves all day
but she will not be the rake, clawing
its way through the earth
to neatly bundle a bouquet;
she can not see ian's pleas
through a rose lens with embers in her eyes.
iii. ian is not afraid to get his hands dirty.
if an eye for an eye leaves the whole world blind,
then maybe rachel was the sacrifice,
& he will not h
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It really depicts a haunting picture of what it's like to be in an urban place that's been abandoned for many reasons. I like how there is a sense of desolation and silence in the undertone of what's being described here. It's kinda like the place has been dead for some time now that it's decaying and rotting away without any human interference or care. Very well done.
It really depicts a haunting picture of what it's like to be in an urban place that's been abandoned for many reasons. I like how there is a sense of desolation and silence in the undertone of what's being described here. It's kinda like the place has been dead for some time now that it's decaying and rotting away without any human interference or care. Very well done.