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Walking into battle armed with broken tongue,
I prepare myself to succeed, climb the rungs.
But how to quell this fear by which I'm high-strung?
DFC Day 20!  That means we're two thirds of the way through!  I'm posting this a day early because I don't know how much internet access I'll have tomorrow.

Anyway, this is a Middle Eastern form called the Muzdawidj, which is made of rhyming triplets with 11 syllables per line.  I wrote it while waiting for my spoken French exam; unfortunately, I wasn't able to answer the question in that last line before said exam began.  ^^;
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brennennn's avatar
I hope you did outstanding in your exam!  This feeling rings so true for me as I've had job interviews this past week that gave me this exact feeling. :P

Your first line here is amazingly descriptive and quite astute.