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The Great Escape

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They won’t stop hunting us, you said,
as we lay quietly, hiding in bed.
The seasons will turn again and again,
but they will chase us straight to the end.

As we lay quietly, hiding in bed,
the world outside may as well have been dead,
but life still flickered within and without,
and with it, as always, that bright spark of doubt.

The seasons will turn again and again,
but those wolves just won’t go back to the den.
And though we try to make our retreat,
It already feels more like defeat.

But they will chase us straight to the end;
This lifelong pursuit will not relent.
But on that night, we lay down our heads.
They won’t stop hunting us, you said.
Day 29 of DFC, and I think I'm gonna make it!  This is a European form called the Retourne, and I had quite a time with it.  Refrain forms are hard to write and harder to edit, so this was a real challenge.  However, I hope that this works for the most part.  The form was fun to write, but I would love to give it another go later on to really do it justice.
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