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Levity lost,
His shoulders dropped
As he understood
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shep4life Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome
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HuntingForHappiness Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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shep4life Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Welcome!
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smith4891 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
So few words, and yet so much impact and power in a moment. I actually felt a sense of surrender as my shoulders dropped. LOL   Good job. :)
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HuntingForHappiness Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!  I'm glad you liked it. :)
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PaleAuthor Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Student Writer
Well my shoulders dropped just from reading this. It's amazing!
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HuntingForHappiness Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!  It's awesome to hear that the poem had some impact. :)
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PaleAuthor Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Student Writer
You're welcome ^^
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Asterlia Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Student General Artist
The body language in this expresses so much emotion. Nice job :)
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HuntingForHappiness Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!  I'm glad the imagery worked for you. :)
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RoseForMyDeath Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014
....amazing.
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HuntingForHappiness Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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RoseForMyDeath Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014
Welcome~
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