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On the spider's web,
dewdrops hang, shining
in the morning light.
dewdrops hang, shining
in the morning light.
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forever and ever and ever
as in love with love and
life as i am,
i am struggling to accept that
good things can't last forever
and a touch
is simply
a touch, fleeting yet
so very beautiful & i'm so stuck
in my own (not so beautiful) brain
dreaming up things that i know
i don't even believe in,
but i want them
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History Burning
the trick is
to make all believe they inheret a
world all their own
remember to erase the words of the
deceased until
death never existed
and put corpses unburied
into neat containers
under every floor
to lock them up tight is
critical;
panic is the plague in this age
and is it any wonder they forget
with puppet parents
who burn books at christmas?
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heritage.
reminding me of where my blood sprung from.
to eat cats' tongues. to eat tree bark, but not a tree's dry veins. peeled off. i am peeled off of the pavement where i melted in the coal mines' sun. a daughter of dry coughs and hidden colours, i swim like an owl through silence through streets. worn down.
to drink the light of the bus' front lights broken at rain. to drink water from the tap in the kitchen. endless fountain of harsh joy. hard work.
heart blood.
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This is a lovely haiku! It is simple and elegant as I believe such poems should be. I like that you went with five syllables per line; it gives it a nice harmony.
As written, it paints a nice image in the reader's mind. It could be even better, if you use words or an image in an unexpected way. That would make the image uniquely yours and even more memorable.
Once again, lovely work!
This is a lovely haiku! It is simple and elegant as I believe such poems should be. I like that you went with five syllables per line; it gives it a nice harmony.
As written, it paints a nice image in the reader's mind. It could be even better, if you use words or an image in an unexpected way. That would make the image uniquely yours and even more memorable.
Once again, lovely work!