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I’m tired of being
broken, he said
to the cracked mirror
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bibliobibuli17 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Wow. Amazing such few words can mean so much. You spoke my heart, I wish I were a fraction as talented :)
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HuntingForHappiness Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! You're really talented too, in the long-form stuff(which I cannot do, to be honest). Thanks again for the comment!
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MizFrizzle19 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
short, but sweet and full of power.
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HuntingForHappiness Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! I thought this concept would be best conveyed in a really short piece, I'm glad you agree.
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morkner Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013
Small but still gives a vivid image. I enjoy people's smaller writings cause sometimes longer pieces just get confusing (i guess the only one that can fully understand poetry is the poet themself).
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HuntingForHappiness Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! I thought this would be best in a really short form, so it's more like a snapshot of the message, rather than a too-long movie. Otherwise it gets diluted.

Thanks again for the comment!
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